My Narrative- The Great escape – Imogen @ New Brighton Catholic

W.A.L.T write a Narrative.

Today In Room 2 we have been learning to write a narrative. A narrative is a made up story. A narrative needs a Introduction/Setting, problem, Rising Action, Climax and a Resolution/conclusion.

The Great Escape

One warm day a Girl called Harmony had a big field for her Cute pets to play in. She has 10 pets! (That’s why she has a big field). The animals Are: a fox 🦊, a dog🐶, a cat🐱, a panda🐼, a penguin🐧, a seal🦭, a horse🐴, a koala🐨, a wolf🐺 and a bunny🐰! There names are Foxy🦊, Buddy🐶, Cheeky🐱, Grace🐼, Pegie🐧, Summer🦭, Clover🐴, Fluffy🐨, Shadow🐺 and Hops🐰. Everyday I played with my pets. They usually play hops and robbers, how you play is Hops my bunny is the cop and the rest is robbers. ¨If you get tagged by hops you become a cop too ¨. After playing lots of Rounds of hops and robbers¨, Night fell. I went in my house to rest, same as my pets but they usually go in the barn where they all have their own beds.

Problem

In the morning when I was still sleeping I heard a big bang or crack. I got out of bed to open my curtains and when I opened the curtains there was a Giant HOLE in the fence!!!!!!!!! All of my pets ran out! I quickly ran out my door (still having my pj’s on) and got in the car and Zoomed after them!

Rising Action

The only problem was that they were everywhere! I drove after Foxy and Hops and man they were fast. I reached out as far as I could go and I caught Foxy! I put foxy in the back seat, Now I’m going to try to catch Hops. Yet again I reached out as far as I could and I caught Hops! I put Hops in the back seat too. Now I have to try and catch the others.

My Target now is Shadow or Clover. On my way round the block I saw Shadow but no sign of Clover. I did the same with Foxy and Hops, I reached out as far as I could and court Shadow. Now, where’s Clover? Well I didn’t find Clover but I found Summer in the outside cold pools. She was too distracted in the pool so I quietly got out of the car and tiptoed to Summer and caught her. Nice, I court Foxy, Hops, Shadow and Summer! 6 more to go!

Climax

I was driving round the block To see if I could see any more But just then the ground was vibrating and I looked up to see what it was and it was the animal control! Someone must have called them to come and catch my other pets! OH NO. I was in the car driving round hoping to try and find the rest of my pets, Suddenly I saw Buddy my dog! I opened my window and called out his name 5 times. (He usually would come after I called his name 5 times). He suddenly looked at me and came running! I opened the door for him and he jumped in. 5 left to go! I have Grace, fluffy, Clover, Cheeky and pegie left!

Just after 2 minutes I saw Clover but he was speeding away because the animal control was after him! I drove as fast as I could and reached out and caught her. OK, now I have 4 pets left to find. After 5 minutes I found Grace and pegie together. I caught pegie straight away because she waddles instead of running. Now I need to catch Grace. She is really big cause she’s a panda so I need a trailer to put her in. I quickly got a trailer out of my garage and went back. When I got back the animal control was chasing Grace! I quickly drove to Grace and I said hop on and she jumped on the trailer. 2 more to go! Even known I had 2 more to go I took my pets back so that the other 2 would fit and they wont run away because some builders fixed the gate. So I dropped off my pets and went back to town.

Resolution/ conclusion

I was A bit worried because what if the animal control found them and catched them I mean i can’t see them. Just as I was going to call animal control I saw the last 2 of my pets! It was fluffy and cheeky. I reached out and caught them then I stopped the car and gave them a big hug. After all of that catching and worrying about stuff Me and all my pets played a game of hops and robbers.

The End!